Bated Breath: A Poet’s Poetic Sojourn Comments

Hi, i enjoy this kind of new-type poem... drive us through all the word to the end and miss it when it's gone. Good write

again you seem like you are shy. why don't you give yourself a chance and try. the sojourns seem nice but not my spice but i'll continue to read and let you feed. on the words that you write until you get it uptight.

your poem could easily be adapted to 'rap' music. Prosy but nice cadence