Tuesday, September 29, 2020

Basic Instinct Comments

Rating: 4.8

Basic instinct

I miss the basic instinct
Before love went extinct
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Dr. Antony Theodore 27 December 2020

I miss the basic instinct Before love went extinct You would be mine I would be fine I would be yours The basic instinct of love. a fine poem. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 22 October 2020

The things we do for love Is amazing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2020

Fascinating poem, exellent rhymes, dear poet! Brilliantly worded! 5***** I always enjoy your poems, poet!

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Phillip Nine Mafunga 06 October 2020

Beautiful flowing piece. Masterly done.

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Terry Craddock 05 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Basic Instincts Individual Expressions' inspired by the poem 'Basic Instinct' by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 03 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'First Love Time Age Love Lessons' inspired by the poem 'Basic Instinct' by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 03 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Love Knows What It Knows' inspired by the poem 'Basic Instinct' by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 02 October 2020

The more often I read this poem, the more I like it, it Even the title of the poem 'Basic Instinct' speaks volumes. The poem asks many simple questions, we have all asked at least some of them. The kind of questions we all ask, many because of the attitude of people and society. The questions taken together seem to give answers, if you think about the questions enough, they shout answers, live your life, not everyone else's. Loved the poem Deluke.

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Terry Craddock 02 October 2020

'This society This anxiety I got one life to live One love to you to give They say i belong there Not with you it's not fair Do we elope Will we cope Do i just tell the world to go to? Do i just trust my heart where it fell? ' The more often I read this poem, the more I like it, it asks many simple questions, the kind of questions we all ask, ...

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Terry Craddock 29 September 2020

'My spirit loves you You know this is true I have grief You have belief I have to have you or die' despite time, distance, culture, class, wealth, poverty, age, infirmity, some love must overcome all obstacles, some love cannot ever find peace rest, without chosen inseparable love found

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2020

When one love one spirit then where is scope of basic instinct, finally it got merged. A 5****Poem. You know the art of building a poem, brick by brick and block by block.

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Varsha M 29 September 2020

Beautiful expression of love woven well in words. As a poetic expression, good work. I have to have you or die This i wont lie My spirit loves you Your spirit loves me My spirit Your spirit Our spirit One spirit One love one spirit...well captured promises made.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 September 2020

I dont know. Today on the forum there is so much talk of death. So i thought i should send a love poem but the character wants to die for love. You cant win.

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