Baseball In Heaven Comments
Young Bert and Kent were baseball nuts
and played it all the time.
They were, of course, quite good at it,
since each was in his prime.
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1 - " or would come to an end." HOW ABOUT: " or if in heaven it would end." 2 - and how about changing: " and unexpected though it seemed, " to: " and, though it was unexpected, " and: 3 - " on back to Earth to talk to Bert, " delete " on" ?
Hahaha๐๐๐. A huge 10, sir Kim. Congrats on your poetry contest triumphs๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค
Thank you so much, Sir Bernard. (When are they going to make you a saint?)
Beautiful humorous poem. Congrats on the feat you achieved...10.
Thank you, Kingsley. I was very surprised to take first, second, and third!
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7/29/2025 10:50:07 PM # 1.0.0
OK, i KNOW,3 STRIKES and i'm out. : ( i did laugh heartily at the last line. well, it seems to me that being reunited with his pal and playing ball in heaven would be acceptable...to a " nut" . bri ;)