Tuesday, May 26, 2015

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Ae darakhto'n k pat'to gawah rehna
Kashkool liye tum khali kharray thay

Har ek ek sha'kh jar'ron tak thi sookhi
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Hira Ahsan
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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2015

A beautiful poem.........................................

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Hira Ahsan 27 May 2015

Thanks for the consideration Sir....I'll be obliged if you help me to improve by pointing out the weak points...it will be much better for us If our seniors help us to grow....its a humble request Sir. Regards

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Mr. M Jamal 26 May 2015

Buhat Khoob. Kareem Rab ne rehmat ka saibaan bheja Barasnay ka hukm subh-o-sham bheja Mukarar :)

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Hira Ahsan 27 May 2015

I'm honoured Sir....thanks for the praise. Regards Hira Ahsan

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