Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Barrenness Comments

Rating: 4.9

To fail to set sights on the good which is highest
What debasing, and mortifying gamble
Is it not evil itself?
I get the feeling of sadness, my Lord...
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
COMMENTS
Lady Evans 06 June 2014

Just love the way you SLAM evil Dr. Kardas! Unbeatable imagery and delivery. From a fellow pro-liver on twitter.

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Christian Soldier 07 May 2009

Expertly decreed dogma...confutes the doubters indeed! God Bless

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Jeremiah Bodine 14 April 2009

Dr. Kardas, this is one of my very favorite poems! You amaze the reader both by the depth of the wisdom included and your absolutely genial expression in this poetically penned masterwork. Thank you for the elightenment about the tragic and even catastrophic effects of sin, which we all should feel responsible for by either perpetrating or failing to respond in eliminating evil. Very powerful poem written in a unique style reaching and stirring the soul.10+++++

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Godspower Oshodin 08 September 2008

it awake the spirit to it calling ways. i believe every things comes for good. what an artistic mind you possess ma'am, keep up the good work.

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Jonas Kildare 06 September 2008

Indeed, at what cost? Our soul.... once again you point out it is in serious jeopardy because we are 'gutless in allowing evil'...What will it take for humans to realize that it is 'sin the voracious thief' that is the culprit? Masterfully done...thanks again for the brain awakening thoughts.

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Kaye Dudley 30 August 2008

Dear Dr. Dorothy, Extremely powerful poem - it speaks loudly and clearly about the reality and seriousness of sin; our 'culpable unconcern/ingnorance.' Unfortunately, as you point out, we all contribute to spreading evil in the world. I love very much the sad repetition at the end of the stanzas. Beatifully written!

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