*barren Walls Of Sorrow Comments

Very impressive Bonnie, if i post my favorite parts i would have to retype the whole poem lol. Thank you for sharing my friend. As always, its a pleasure. :)

Excellent piece very well written as always. This piece was sad with a beautifully haunting message.

Beautiful vivid poem Bonnie...the images jump off the page at me...10++++

Moving imagery you bring in there, Bonnie...new sand and the lonely moon and the message you receive...and the barren walls you leave...excellent piece...10

'now is the time for a new start in my life leaving behind the battered hinges on the door to my forsaken heart, but letting the opportunity to replace its barren walls of sorrow...... ' very moving touching poem indeed..in fact this is the time for a new start in my life too, but it is said than done thought....to get that kick start, when the past is full of wounds... nice inspirational write ma'am... regards shan

Beautiful Imagery... every word is perfect. Lovely poem Bonnie.. very emotional and deep

emotions filled this milady. i read it with an aching heart. it is well written milady.

Bonnie, the sea speaks volumes in this powerful poem. It is all there, the thrashing waves, the driftwood, gulls and the moon pulling me into your story. The imagery of the door concluded an excellent poem. 10 Karin Anderson

Another emotive piece of work Bonnie that conjures up so many wonderful images. Love, Andrew xx

'and now is the time for a new start in my life leaving behind the battered hinges on the door to my forsaken heart, but letting the oppourtunity to replace its barin walls of sorrow...... 'this is a very nice piece..i qoute this stanza coz for me its the highlightfor this poem...never be dismayed for there is always a sun after darkness...there is always a rainbow after the rain...and tears will be replaced with laughters...let time heals the wounds..make your life as pretty as the colors..make all the senses active and don't make your heart as hard as the stone..accept GOD'S will for HE knows everything...this is also what i did... naizz