Friday, August 3, 2018

Barren Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I choose a dying star
and share its stellar light
for in my eyes tiny beams
I am reflecting light right back.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

As the fragrant petals fall I stoop to kiss the stem; if I love the barren things then I am one of them.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2018

A wonderful and thought provoking poem. The last stanza is the heartbeat of this well crafted write. Yes, the love and care we showed to anything speaks of what we are.10+++

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