Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Barren Is The Vine Comments

Rating: 4.8

The cracked cobblestone memories, are heavy with time.
As are the wrinkles, on my once young face.
Carved by the years, burned by the sun, barren is the vine.
Cold fingers now reap the harvest, of this empty place.
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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

one are the flowers of Spring from my mind. the flowers fade as time goes on. a lovely write.

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Sara Fielder 26 January 2012

This poem is perfection Jack. You really should write more my friend.

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Silentpoet Grl 23 January 2012

chilling! Another great poem! - really love the feel and images this one creates! !

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Sarah Hardin 30 December 2011

A haunting piece....I've read it thrice and will continue to come back to this. Sends a slight shiver down my spine.

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Adeline Foster 27 December 2011

Fine poem, - Read mine We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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jack green

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