Monday, October 5, 2009

Barren Chatter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cake walks and avalanches dangle inviting
morsels of distress rushing like television
on schedules of mischief with egos aplenty
hauling the barrow without common vigilance
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Patti Masterman 05 October 2009

There is a lot of clatter going on in here and it reminds me most of all of the world, and it's continuous movement and motion; and the con men and the rip offs and the casual carelessness, it's all captured in here; a dizzy ride for sure. Thank you; your colorful language always revs up my engine again for fresh inspiration.

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