Wednesday, July 13, 2005

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Rating: 3.3

This calming river, a surface like glass
where deeper below emotions surpass
in longing for something more...
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Tears In Rain 28 November 2005

This felt like boating on the river Styx. Like you say, we all must cross it some day.

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Hi David, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I think a lot of people might be able to identify with this poem, at some point in their lives.

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David Gerardino 17 July 2005

kim, i like this poem...............as i read it, i can picture the moment with a perfect understanding, with the past and present.........

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