Barn’bay To Bloodsbay! Comments

Great poem. God bless the poetical unoppressed-MJG.

Of course I knew it would be strong and full of angst. 'Head spins on he spindle of the city' did it for me. Powerful imagery. A masterpiece. At last reprieve with flowers.....so so moving Karin Anderson

Very very powerful poem indeed..........10

nice poem --read mine allah-ram-jesus (aftermath) --10 regards anju

strong worded, impressive write. you have expressed angst, horror, disgudt, compassion and finally need for courage and hope.10 Mamta

Vaid Sb.. I have tears in my eyes... Sirf woh log jo insaanyaat ka dard rakhtay hain samajh saktay hain k kaisa lagta hai jab insaanyaat ka khoon huta hai, jab zameen ki gaud laho say surkh huti hai... Jab kisi ghar mein saf-e-maatam bichhti hai... This is really a great poem... Thanks for sharing... Your brother, Kamran

Rusty minds rusted by rascal teaching and ambition.The culprits are the children of the infamous Master called Satan! ! !

Indeed nice composition! I liked the ray of hope reflected in the line 'We have to plant flowers'...

hmmm impressive...........well penned..........

Very good... Great write Krista