Sunday, June 14, 2009

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As a child, I loved the sacks of seed
That slumbered in the barn like slack-mouthed toads.

I'd plunge small wrists for pleasure in the amber pellets,
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Sheena Blackhall
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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

A nice descriptive poem..........................

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Tim Caton 29 August 2009

I love your descriptions which draw the reader into the reality of the scene. 'Then came the harvest, turning wheel of the cart. The field, alive wth farmhands, whistling, cursing. Grey rats scuttling; combine clacking, cutting etc..'.

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