barking dogs float
on a moat of fog.
hawks shriek by
kamikazi pilot like...
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Your title pulled me into.... a rhythmic, lyrical, bouncing blend of rhyme & alliteration... you are a true wordsmith! ! !
Yes, it was the title. No, I was not disappointed. Both barking dogs floating and cats with candle waxed fur make me want to laugh a lot for some strange reason.