Baris Dance Comments

So cool...such a situation of unease and tense you yet explain with a bit of humour. I like your approach to war here in the poetry, Baris Dance.

war is pain, and pain is all you don't need

Dance-like light-footed poem that takes us on a short but deeply felt sway through a dance ritual of which we, in the end, don't know if it ought to send down shivers our spine or if we ought to be feeling ourselves on the safe side of the troupe.

Ahmad, I really like the room for interpretation, yet clarity for a single vision. Well done.

Vow! I am sure it was an amazing dance! Good write!

i liket it, it made me imagine hoe that dance was(is) ....good.