Friday, January 30, 2009

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I thought of you today
No, that is a lie
I thought of you from the moment I opened my eyes
Till the moment sleep relieved me
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Hazem Al Jaber 31 January 2009

yes, , we all should say waw.. waw, , how amazing stunning powerfull this great poem.. penned through a thirsty feelings.. so well done.. thanks for sharing tina.. yours, , hazem al..

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John Woodhouse 30 January 2009

wow.... amazing, I actually feel so sad after reading this. A great sign of a poem to see that there feelings evoked in the reader. T.S. Elliot said that genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. Though I do not and cannot understand this poem entirely I know what you are saying, paradoxically perhaps! Well done, keep writing please, I'll be back =]

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