Friday, August 26, 2011

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All the night the little flower,
Dwelled in shyness and no laughter.
Absorbed it was in sweet dreams
Of nearing Sun and in it its bloom.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Indira Renganathan 25 August 2019

A poem with the realistic content...the last stanza is superb speaking on the nature of fate..a well crafted poem...thank you Ratnakar....thanks for your comment on my poem too

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Sweet dreams, expression of poem is fantastic. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 April 2016

Light! From the rays of the sun. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2015

Same if the case with every one, No one can here with fate bargain, T0 avoid miseryand to be happy Not to be shadowed by dismay.........of course it is, no one can here with fate bargain. We can not bargain with fate. Fate is so powerful that we have to admit.Well presentation of poem related to life.....10

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Valsa George 29 October 2015

Quite true...... we cannot bargain with Fate. What ever fate gives, we have to accept, willingly or unwillingly! Through the micro image of a flower, you have given a macro picture of life! Enjoyed!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 October 2015

No one can bargain with fate. to avoid misery and to be happy. i was just thinking what a wisdom it is. we have to accept life as it comes and happens. The readiness to accept life as it is without complaining is a great gift.. such an attitude makes you peaceful. nice ideas my dear Ratnakar. God bless you tony

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