Tuesday, July 14, 2009

# Barely Writing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my god
Why am I doing this
Writing poetry
And giving away
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

Ha, I loved this. I lurked at poemhunter for years, too petrified to post a word. Now I sit about day and night thinking, did I write about that secret yet? You have hit the nail right on the head now. (smile)

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Rakesh Bedi 03 August 2009

See, how secretive are the poets! The more they write the more they crave to share their secrets! ! Isn't it funny? ? ?

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

Exactly how I feel today - realising all my stuff is logged on google now. Hell - what if a certain someone reads it!

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Smiley Hooker 28 July 2009

Poetry is a freedom of expression. Readers are always craving for a little something about us...the more you bare yourself, the more they get hooked. Any shocking revelations, dear? just kidding...ha ha ha! This is short but speaks a lot. Well done! :)

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 July 2009

So true so funny 10++

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Oh! Sonya I feel the same. But isn't it interesting that other people have secrets like ours... These few words have certainly evoked many comments. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Duh Huh 26 July 2009

Isnt it something how we just put ourselves out there for all to see. Exposing ourselves to whatever may be said. A certain type of courage is required i think. :) Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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Alison Cassidy 26 July 2009

I'm sure there are many who will nod in agreement on reading this - but few who could have put it so cleverly and succinctly. Excellent piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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i feel the same sometimes but secrets are beautiful, our expressions.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

oh! its sweet! yea, bcoz poets are exploring beauties and they are discoverer! 10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 July 2009

Well, you have revealed another secret in this poem. Wonderful, Sonya......10.

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Sandra Martyres 21 July 2009

We all do it instinctively Sonya...I guess it is these 'secrets' that inspire poetry

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Lillian Thomas 21 July 2009

This is wonderful! and the title fits to a 't.'

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nomad omnia 21 July 2009

you are a magician of secrets - a secret within a secret can never be known. We can only guess...and so each takes with them a different, delicous, truth.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 July 2009

Continue with wrting...that will surely give you more secrets to share! Good piece Sonya...i liked the imaginative way you relate God and secrets there in your lines...thanks...10

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Original Unknown Girl 15 July 2009

Clever title... lovely short sweet note. They say that when we are inspired it is our soul writing and the latin derivative of inspiration is 'from God'. I believe when we write it is us at our most bare. Nothing wrong in it - cathartic and healing. And creativity also has its plusses! Keep on Sonya - you're doing great. HG: -) xx

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

to connect..... Ruthy: -D

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Paul Hansford 14 July 2009

I simply love this. If we are good poets we give away our secrets all the time. But it made me smile.

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Laurie Hill 14 July 2009

Each poem is a part of the writer and for every secret we share a secret we keep..we only hint. Most never fully, stand, their soul naked...........

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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