Thursday, March 15, 2012

Barely Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I slept with the depth of a winter bear
And dreamt summer beaches
And the sand which's there
And hungered for a picnic
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Danny Draper
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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

a fun poem well written enjoyed the read

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Constance K Yost 19 September 2012

I imagine the bear got sand in his teeth-by that time my smile had become audible.

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Sara Fielder 26 March 2012

How can one not smile while reading this? !

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Walterrean Salley 25 March 2012

Lol. Really fun! Don't think I could stomach a sandwich filled with sand witches. Good thing it was a bear. Quite a funny poem.

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Valerie Dohren 15 March 2012

Anyone for sandwiches! !

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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