Sunday, December 4, 2011

Barefoot To Heart... Ode Of Love Comments

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what eyes says is truth,

when lips zipped loose.
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ijlal haider
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Mohammad Muzzammil 22 December 2011

nice poem and it seems that it is in initial stage, but good one

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

Well-thoughts composed! ! ! ! A g'd poem! !

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 18 December 2011

It is nice venting of pend up longing.

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Sonali Sings 16 December 2011

'barefoot', a symbol of being pious..your heart with love so pure..Nice one!

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Seema Chowdhury 15 December 2011

Welcome to the world of poetry Ijlal. Remember what comes from the heart touches the heart. Beautiful thoughts composed. Good luck. Take care

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ijlal Haider 04 December 2011

for more poem visit www. pibi2.blogspot.com

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