Saturday, April 7, 2007

Barefoot I Walk With My Alligator Shoes Comments

Rating: 4.1

He once was a handsome young man
A young lady he took in his hand
They vowed to journey together
through the good and the terrible weather
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JoAnn McGrath
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Melvina Germain 15 April 2007

Thankyou for sharing this with us JoJo, I really appreciat it, I feel it is good when you can laugh a little at the situation instead of continually grieving over it. I lost my Father to this horrific desease, the meds were just too much for him. Thankyou once again JoJo---Melvina---

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Alison Cassidy 13 April 2007

In my experience, it is the sense of humour and the ability to respond to love that are the final human characterstics to hand on to the demented mind. You have captured both in this delightful silly piece. I'm sure your father will get a giggle out of it. As will all who read it. love, Allie xxxx

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David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, this is poignant with a small slice of humour. A beautiful poem that is worthy of more than the 10 that I gave it. They just haven't got enough votes on the meter and never will have. A truly exceptional piece of writing here. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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