Saturday, March 14, 2009

Barefoot Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadowed are my footprints
through silent hallways
lined with unfired lamps
dampened by mornings dew.
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Mari Martin
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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 March 2009

Not a barefoot dream I feel, but a blessed dream of Mari Martin that turned into a nice poem.

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Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

interesting composition woven with finr imagery and metaphors..10

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 14 March 2009

lovely. i love the line 'Distant moonlight begs the sun to rise'

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