Saturday, December 2, 2017

Barefoot Comments

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Wearing a white dress and gold necklace chain.
Ella looked so sweet walking barefoot in the rain.
She just wanted to feel the rain between her toes.
And the raindrops falling lightly on her cornrows.
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Lamar Cole
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Chris Embrick 02 December 2017

Oh, that age would not hinder or forget the simple pleasures of childhood. A wonderful picture in a poem. Thank you. poet and friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Her gait on rain is so pleasant. Loved reading it. Beautiful poem dear Lamar, thank u.

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Smell and feel the rain... It's refreshing experience, lovely poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2017

Lamar, such an interesting write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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