Sunday, February 19, 2006

Barefeet Without Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

She climbs the mountains without shoes
and as she sees the summit
she sings a theme, afraid to lose
her way. She hears me hum it,
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gershon hepner
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Emma Johnson 03 March 2006

Your poems always make us ascend without wings. A thrilling flight.

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Anna Russell 22 February 2006

I really liked this, it evoked a dreamlike sense of floating. And top mark for rhyming hum it with summit! Hugs Ann xxx

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***** ********* 19 February 2006

Perfect sincronicity Gershon. Very romantic with a touch of sweet erotica. Very nice work indeed. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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Gina Onyemaechi 19 February 2006

Dreamy and magical, Gershy. I love it. Have a 10. With warmth, Gina.

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Purple Rose 19 February 2006

What a great poem! I love it! Purple Rose

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