She climbs the mountains without shoes
and as she sees the summit
she sings a theme, afraid to lose
her way. She hears me hum it,
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I really liked this, it evoked a dreamlike sense of floating. And top mark for rhyming hum it with summit! Hugs Ann xxx
Perfect sincronicity Gershon. Very romantic with a touch of sweet erotica. Very nice work indeed. 10 from smiling at you, Tai
Dreamy and magical, Gershy. I love it. Have a 10. With warmth, Gina.
Your poems always make us ascend without wings. A thrilling flight.