Friday, October 3, 2008

Bard's Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

The traveling bard
Has to make due
Snapping the strings
For enjoyment on cue
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Adam Day
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Fay Slimm 14 October 2008

This is most interesting and thought provoking Adam. I see the rhythm as gently flowint to your imagery of the Bard as being in some measure in all of the places you mention, the house, the baby, the wolf and the rooster. Very clever.

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