Saturday, January 10, 2015

Barbie Dolls Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am grandfather of five Barbie Dolls,
And a father of two more how I forgot!
When all the seven I see together,
I look at amazing lovely nice old knot,
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Farhan Mirza 14 January 2015

I like the description and the imagery...keep up the good work...and hope to read more

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Salini Nair 13 January 2015

beautiful poem for grand children........nice

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Sarmad Mirza 12 January 2015

Very beautiful poem Nice One

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Bisma Mirza 11 January 2015

wow! ! beautiful and of course lovely poem.........sooooooo sweet :) :)

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Valsa George 11 January 2015

What warmth exists between the grand parents and the grand children! I am sure your barbie dolls must be very cute! When games are played, finally the elders have to accept defeat! When the little ones need sweets or ice cream, they come to you as a single band forgetting all rivalries..... So true.... I liked that part much!

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Khalid Saifullah 10 January 2015

It's simply beautiful......................10

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 January 2015

Sweet, beautiful amazing and enchanting.......................10

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