***barbarism In Pink City Again! ! ! Comments

Beautifully written these things need to be said and you have done eloquently and honestly brave ten my dear friend

'Should we still call them homosapiens' is a debatable point. Thanks for this very relevant poem. Yes, to think that people who do things like this once were children...thanks Dr Subhendu.

Dr.Kar-Your poem is beautiful, and fraught with deep meaning. I agree with it whole heartedly, and admire your courage in speaking out. kate

insanity is endemic in the race of man my friend Kill those who are different or believe differently but never examine your own beliefs. The purpose of terrorism is to bring terror and all too easily achieved Any fool can finda cause but few can think

This is a very disturbing description indeed, as is often the case with truth. It is sometimes hard to believe the brutality that the human race is willing to inflict upon itself. Even though, somewhat depressing, this is an excellent work. Thanks for the invitation. Best wishes Richard

I reach out to those who have suffered all kinds of problems as regards to what happenend in times of war... I love this poem! , i will add it as one of my favourites...

Such desperation and destruction. If there is a God, how does this continue to happen? Makes you wonder if Evil is winning this war. We can only continue to pray for peace and not let this evildoing take us under. A powerful piece, written from the heart and soul of one who truly understands the implications of war and its consequences. My heart reaches out to you and your country, and every country affected by the devastation brought about by evilminded warmongers with no respect for the lives of others.

We have turned quite blunt to the horrendous acts being committed by merchants of death who dont have any religion but to kill. The poem nicely presents the pains and the heart rending experiences of the afected in Jaipur. It is but touching and makes you sink more into the state of gloom where we all are and pray for God for the wit to the mindless.

It is evident from these incidents only love can bring hope and peace and nothing else.rest all should be secondary.It is incompetence to use violence against helpless people..............

Against tragic element the Love and future respect «pink city» … appears...

Yet they do live here...they live among us, and wait until the right moment when they can prey upon innocent lambs. You have portrayed pure evil...raw...brutal...and hated. no matter what humanity exists...there shall always remain...evil as a balance. Hugs, Dee

Your poem perfectly regects all the evils inflicted on mankind by mankind itself but there also is kindness and compassion between people while we should never forget the injustices done we should concentrate on the acts of goodness and unselfishness that we sometimes show eqach other Harry

You have well brought out your protest against evil through your good poem. The poem touched my heart. Let me congratulate you for your good thinking and words. You deserves appreciation, Doctor.

i'll pray d wish in d last lines comes true.......it seems dats only wat we can do

This is a very powerful piece of work. Let's hope that one day the world will be a peaceful place and that we all may live long enough to see it happen. Best wishes, Andrew

The title of this poem invites the reader to prepare for a not so pleasant journey. And you did not disappoint. One barbaric is on an unconscious mission to destroy and destruct. This is a condtioning process. Believing to inflict another sorrow is not observed by the Earth which lives and breathes...feels and reflects. OR returns what it gets. Interesting poem. A bit 'gloomy', however, that is its purpose. And that has been achieved.

The imagery is a strong reminder of the horrors humans inflict on one another. I found myself reading some of these lines again and I'm trurly impressed. Thank you for sharing this.

Passion, angst, and lament, bleed from the womb of this sadly beautiful work....Your versing, here, so accurately reflects the anathema & shock of this Anti-Christ war on peace, that these barbarians continue to inflict on innocent hearts, and with spineless, abhorrent cowar.Excellent Work, Doctor, indeed! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

i had to vote 10!

a well written poem... i know in this modern days barbarism still exist in other place which should not happen anymore but still exist...then to terrorism... co - exist to each other...these must be condemned and stopped. peace we lived by, peace we love and must exist every seconds.