Sunday, July 26, 2009

Bar Fly Comments

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I watch you watching me watch you
You assume I do not see what I see
On the exterior so blatantly obvious
That which is hidden so conspicuously
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Cheryl A. Caron
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Callie Carroll 26 July 2009

'I watch you watching me watch you' is a very intriguing line. I think it would be great in a villanelle, but darn, it belongs to you!

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Cheryl A. Caron

Cheryl A. Caron

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