Sunday, August 30, 2020

Baobab Lover Comments

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You have eyes that attract like a baobab tree
Where men, women and children get refreshments for free
Your teeth are milky as the fruit itself
Your hair dark as the kernel that remains after sucking the milky fruit away.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus 31 August 2020

taking your roots...heart-my favourite line..the metaphor of baobab is poetically wound

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 August 2020

Taking your roots deep down into the limited depths of my heart Your thickness is the trunk that stays nourished for centuries Providing moisture from the scarce depths of love to the leaves of passion that never leave .........wow excellent loving expression allegorically it dealineated the form of hearty feeling through the Baobab tree

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