Thursday, April 28, 2016

Bantam Roosters And Pleasure Boosters Comments

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I knew a man who had too many friends,
small use they were but so he did pretend,
and drink with them at night like men who sense
that life should yield much more than its pretense.
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Barry Middleton
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Norah Tunney 28 April 2016

Enjoyed the humour and rhyme Barry

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Barry Middleton 28 April 2016

Thank you Norah. Glad you liked it.

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Pamela Sinicrope 28 April 2016

Like this one! Bantam roosters as in small aggressive roosters....the smaller the rooster the more free range hens needed? Anyways, I appreciate the use of metaphor and the rhyme adds to the humor as well as the message. Well done!

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Barry Middleton 28 April 2016

Thanks. I'm still posting older work for a while and I never know about these poems I wrote long ago. I like them but never know if any one else will.

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