Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Banished Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the earth was fashioned,
From the likeness of God, the man;

And the breath of life,
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Gillena Cox
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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

well written... great flow..

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Preetam Shetty 20 May 2010

Then Humans did something which banished them from the Holy garden of the lord........And now Humans are doing things which might get them banished from the kingdom of the lord Good poem

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the life of Adam and Eve the most most famous account of deception poetically described very nicely here, a 10 indeed for creativity, rhythm and style, great piece

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