Friday, July 12, 2013

Banish Me Comments

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Banish me from your world,
as I could give you only scream.
We couldn't make a love-circle,
draw a line between our dream.
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Neela Nath Das
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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 July 2013

A beautiful thought of resignation to the lost love but still holding to the past! Nice poem!

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R.j. Wynn 21 July 2013

I think we all relate to this message and if not. Whst a shame.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 July 2013

For me my past with you is enough What a great way to express deep love! Nice poem. Thank you.

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David Wood 15 July 2013

Banish me from your love seems a bitter pill taken from experience. An enjoyable poem.

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Patricia Grantham 13 July 2013

I love this one Hari. Banish me from your love and I shall find another treasure trove. Love stops but life goes on.Good write.

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R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

Another raw emotional gush. Love it Hari

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