I am a holy Banian tree stands in front of a temple
Where there is shade all around me
Having large branches and leaves in me
Capable to give cool and breeze to all
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I love this poem about the Banian tree. Your description of this tree is so detailed that it helps the reader to envision the shade and coolness that it brings. Birds, animals, insects, humans find lots of solace there. A very refreshing write. Enjoyed.
The poem is written with such conviction, that I couldn't help but re-read to make sure I don't miss anything. I too, will have a look at how a banian tree look, im sure it is as blissful and meaningful as you have portrayed it. A sensual poem, highly enjoyable.
To see a banyan tree sprawling its branches and spreading shade is a joyous sight... With the slightest breeze, its leaves tremble and quiver... It is believed to be sacred as it is seen in front of a temple! It is equally a haven to travellers in the hot sun and small animals and birds and is sturdy enough to withstand the storm and rain... Enjoyed!
Beautiful flow of words describing banian tree....I loved reading lines.... My tremblings leaves are so much interesting To all of the humans when there is summer heat When I give lot of shades and wind They think fit to sit underneath. Very beautiful way you have captured banian tree in words..... I could imagine each lines. Loved reading it.