Bang Bang Your Dead Comments

I like it True words written here...

well done...thanks for sharing

Verna...This one brought focus to the violence that is in many of our cities (not just Toronto) . Good effort made here. I offer three observations...your poem would be easier to read if you don't use upper case letters throughout...some of your words are run together. If you use word first before posting, and then copy and paste, you get to save a copy and also do spellcheck, etc. Also...write about things which have passionate meaning to you to start with. This is a good topic that you've chosen, but I wonder why you have chosen it? Just constructive criticism...no intent to offend. Hugs, Dee

i can see how passionate you feel about this, keep up the good work.