Thursday, April 8, 2021

Bang, Bang Comments

Rating: 5.0

She stared into the barrel of his gun -
Just like she did,
Once upon her yesterday.
The brutal flashbacks had no mercy,
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Collette Y Anderson Williams
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 April 2021

A very touching and deeply poignant poem of love. Well conveyed and crafted. The recurring lines make the poem powerful.Top Marks.

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Kostas Lagos 08 April 2021

Well written! Bravo!

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