Sunday, January 10, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

He laughed and shook his head
as he neatly slipped the card back into the flowery envelope
and tucked it into his back pocket
After a yawn and a stretch, he finally looked up,
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Violet Eztli
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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Explicitly direct filled with a melancholy ache, yet full of anger for the goodness in a love that is no more. Very deep emotion, grasps the mind totally with it's rhythm. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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