the door goes bang
he leaves
with no assurance that he is returning
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in the island of himself where a surf and a tide lies in his solitude i like three lines
Bang Huh! ... My Condolences to the Victim and the shooter (I Guess) ... Interesting Story... Could make a movie of it (smile) ... MoonBee
good write i agree that this poem is very good work so yeah keep them up ^_^
this is good i love ittt mann i love your ideas