Sunday, August 10, 2008

Bang! Comments

Rating: 3.3

the door goes bang

he leaves
with no assurance that he is returning
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Ayi Escalona
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Dezy Nezy 25 November 2009

this is good i love ittt mann i love your ideas

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Chuck Wendigo 24 November 2009

in the island of himself where a surf and a tide lies in his solitude i like three lines

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Sahar Sahar 05 November 2009

It is scary.......the victim fears to live.........10++++++

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Moonbee Canady 28 October 2009

Bang Huh! ... My Condolences to the Victim and the shooter (I Guess) ... Interesting Story... Could make a movie of it (smile) ... MoonBee

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James Ferguson 20 August 2009

good write i agree that this poem is very good work so yeah keep them up ^_^

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cherry poppins 21 October 2008

the tittle is a hot one keep up the good work

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