Bandstand Beach Comments

Like twinkling stars so high above, ...................lovely poem and the mentioned line is the best description of the poem......

Lovely rich prose in this effort. The wind, the sea, the lovers, the beach, I can feel it all as you write it. Imagery is beautiful. Love is in the very air you breathe and the wind carries it where it will. The sea is restless as are the lovers and those with no lover for the right one has not yet appeared Very nice poem and well written.

very restful write,1st stanza is very peaceful, you descibe the attraction of the sea verywell

BEACH--has multiple poetic connotations---and you penned then through poetic prism-lovely

I could understand the poet wish to be tranquility of peace, love and reality. Sometimes nature will blow away all the uneasy feeling and heartache. I find the rhythm are smooth as words usage is reader friendly. Keep your good work.

the subtle message is most appealing

WOW! ...how perfect! .....opening, transition, closure...rhymes, metaphors, music...it's just a perfect and ideal poem! (however, the wind won't travel from the east i think.you're in Mumbai, so the sea is coming from the west.right? i'm not good in geography though) thanks for sharing

Very nice, I like it very well. Your end-rhyming is perfect and delightful. I enjoyed the scene you painted poetically. It was delightful to read!