Monday, August 8, 2011

Banalata Sen (An Inspiring Woman Character) Comments

Rating: 4.9

From the blue, widest sea to
the deep dense woods wrapping
the dark shadows, travelled i
and travelled for an uncounted years.
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Swarnendu Biswas
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Deep Mukherjee 02 February 2012

the poem itself is a piece to treasure! ! ! your translation is really appreciatory! ! really like it! ! !

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Harish Surwade 23 August 2011

good......i like it!

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Vipins Puthooran 13 August 2011

Hii friend, , , it's a wonderful poem, no need to iterate it... Effluent imagination, , , your Banalata has scored 10

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anIRuDdHa sarKar 12 August 2011

i mean the bengali one..........

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anIRuDdHa sarKar 12 August 2011

btw........ writer er naam ta dite partis.......

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anIRuDdHa sarKar 12 August 2011

ek kothay oshadharon.............

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Alafe Ramat 11 August 2011

I love the use of words especially 'after river close their mirror', nice work my friend.

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Ramesh Rai 11 August 2011

tomar lekha khub bhalo laglo, anando pelam. asha kori aaro bhalo likhbe tomar. face booke amake aar amar chhele uresh rai ke dekhte parbe ramesh rai

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Abdallah Gamal 11 August 2011

Wo0o0o0o0o0w what a fantastic poem, , every line in touched me, , i loved the second verse, , really beautiful imagination and wonderful pic. painted with a magic colors, , nice poem my friend, , rated 10+++++

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Ammar Vohra 10 August 2011

nice translation dude...

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Allemagne Roßmann 10 August 2011

Well travelled to yours Banalata Sen.The crickety is still longing with desire in the mind and soul.Well done.Keep the good work up.Narration and interpretation is always difficult in another language.Wonderful effort i must say here.

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Louis Cecile 10 August 2011

A quite deep narrative flow to this poem and the ending analogy is exceptional. The line 'After the day gets tired' really is a great way to open up for the finish. The beginning is quite haunting and certainly drew me in to read further. Excellent poem.

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Elizabeth Grace 09 August 2011

I liked this quite a lot. You have some really good images, such as the transition from day to night. Very well done.

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 08 August 2011

This is simply wonderful Swarnendu, you capture the essence of this great woman through nature in great translation.... keep writing, your friend, Ruth Lavelle

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Kee Thampi 08 August 2011

A hunting poem and deep to sacrifice and travelled for an uncounted years. In the mid of Ashoka forest, an idle soul grasped my heart, getting me lifeless, but from there walked i a long distance and reached the darkest city, where the davil sucked the vapour of life. But, i kept searching for you, and that survived me, Banalata. I love to read these type of real poem from quilt of golden lines

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