Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Ban The Bomb Comments

Rating: 5.0

War is a nonsense as it doesn't make sense,
It's much much better to sit on the fence.

There's only one race, the Human Race
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Catherine Ayres
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Isaac Maliya 15 July 2009

Good poem with a clever choice of diction. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Keep it up. It is a 10.

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Ian Bowen 15 July 2009

Catherine, good start with your first poem. Well written piece. Ian

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