Friday, April 14, 2006

Ban All The Guns Comments

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Let's make a law
that bans all the guns
we could use all the money
to tear down the slums
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Charles M Moore
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Not a member No 4 25 February 2007

Hey, just read a forum reference that categorised you and I together on the subject of fluid and lyrical writing styles and thought I'd have a look! ! And yes, the poet responsible was right about you for sure! ! Very lyrical. Nothing contrived in the writing. Smooth and professional. A genuine artist. The content is very admirably humane and idealistic. I like this a lot. jim

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Will Barber 13 May 2006

A very heartfelt piece. As Rodney King said, 'Can't we all just get along? ' - this was after he'd be savagely beaten by police, by the way. My own country has spent enough money in Iraq to rebuild a thousand slums. The slums are still here - and there. Well said.

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Preeti - is here! 23 April 2006

Superb Right! Guns and war are no good...

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Brian Dorn 19 April 2006

Awesome poem Charles! Brilliantly said... It all makes sense to me. Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 18 April 2006

Brilliantly said and nothing else needed to express this, Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 14 April 2006

War and loss of life has been with us since Cain and Abel. I wished this world could be more like the garden of Eden, what a thought. Patricia

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Charles Chaim Wax 14 April 2006

a strong poem with a poem message which should appear here more often lest we forget that others suffer a wonderful poem

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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