Thursday, October 21, 2010

Balm Comments

Rating: 2.8

When the darkness of my heart
dissolves in the clouds,
When my tears come out ripping
the veil of eye lids
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Malaya Roses 17 March 2011

Sadness need to be console and the best was concluded in the poem. Find the healing balm from the heaven and guide by true faith. Well done.

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Manolo Del Toro 14 November 2010

The tears come out ripping the veil of your eyelids? What do you have in there a water hose, turn down the pressure dude.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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