Thursday, February 21, 2008

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We lie facing the lamp.

He is still.
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Kara Entriken
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Afzal Shauq 03 August 2009

Warmth bleeds and seeps through the white weave -from my skin to his from his skin to mine- and we are still as we lie facing the lamp. you seem the poet of reality as I said and this poem is one of them which touch hearts and knock souls.. I really appreciate your poetry and of course this poem much.. loved it..well done

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