Sunday, August 10, 2014

Balloons Comments

Rating: 5.0

The man with the balloons, stood alone amongst the crowd,
The boy, in sheer excitment, saw the man and cried aloud,
Then tugging at his father's sleeve, his face a shining glow
He stared into his father's eyes, and pointed at the way to go.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2020

You have amazingly observed the balloon sellers amongst the crowd. His little face could light the streets for many miles although he could not hear his father. He looked at the sky. Inside the crowd the little boy struggled a lot. This poem is thought provoking and this makes us emotional.....5 stars..

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