Balloonist's Log, Final Entry Comments

In you poem, 'A Photograph of the Day-Shift... you did it with four words: 'Fall with them now' This time you have done it with one: 'Up-' You have taken me both directions. I just want to let you know it's hard to read and hold your breath at the same time.

You have expertly captured the joyful anticipation of the takeoff, the elation of the ride, the concern of the descent, and the dread of the conclusion. Superb poetry! Yen

Exciting! You built the suspense well. keep on SusxGLx