Saturday, October 4, 2008

Balloon Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was an old lady
She went up in a balloon,
She went to have a dance
With the man from the moon,
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COMMENTS
Romeo Della Valle 15 April 2012

Wow! What a powerful imagination and creativity you have my dear Pamela! Indescribable and amazing! This touching write is well crafted and the sense of humor to some points, is admirable! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! ! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Carl Harris 12 March 2009

Well, this is a charming and witty write, Pamela, one that certainly brings a smile to any reader! Hopefully that old lady will have a better time on her next trip, and bring back the proof to convince her friends! Carl.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 January 2009

A joyful read. I hope next year she will take a camera with her.

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Ivor Hogg 12 January 2009

I do hope you are preparing an anthology for children of all ages

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Emily Oldham 02 November 2008

great fun to read! keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 October 2008

Yeah great adventure and nice to read a very beautiful lines of light humour andventure.I enjoyed

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Dee Daffodil 11 October 2008

LOL...Always good to have proof of one's adventures! ! : -) Hugs, Dee

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