Balloon And Parachute Comments

Very creative. sympathies for your boyfriend.

An interesting story to read. Well written.

marvellous poem..thanks 10 here for you maria..

reads rather introspective maria rose... first impression is that your boyfriend... then.. was jealous and that you wanted freedom and that you in fact blossomed while he spent much time in your shadow... maybe i am way off the mark so i will have another read some time and see what it says to me next time around..

Like the tone you set from the opening line...lots of positive verve & movement, here...smooth & crisp.Solid crafting. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

Really intense fast paced riveting read thank you