Friday, August 17, 2007

Ballistic Comments

Rating: 5.0

head upside down
'im about to drown
drown in depression
its my obsession
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Austin Wheeler 02 January 2010

That sounded like me on New Year's Eve. Well minus the drowning. Unless you count drowning in meaningless substance as drowning. i havent come across any poet quite like you and thats a compliment I can relate too since I havent come across a poet quite like myself either. It seems like you have a knack for poppin out the classics quickly tho.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 September 2007

That poem spoke to me... I loved the poem AND the title. They were both excellent. Great work! Keep writing.

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Evaughn Gray 19 August 2007

wow that was a very good poem i loved it..kinda scary though but n a funny kinda way..~hazel

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