She starts gently tapping on the floor and then romps,
With one hand spread and other near to chest, she stomps;
Stage light follows her as she glissades below,
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you have picturised the ballet dancer so beautifully and immortalised the dancer in your poetic composition, , it is difficult to separate the dancer from dance and poetry from poet/ here poetess :)
Feels like I’m there! This as well as other poems by Neethu, paints a vivid picture of the experience. While never having attended a live ballet performance, I feel like I’ve been to one now. Can’t wait for your next poem, keep the great poems coming.
Feels like I’m there! This as well as other poems by Neethu, paints a vivid picture of the experience. While never having attended a live ballet performance, I feel like I’ve been to one now. Can’t wait for your next poem, keep the great poems coming.
Can anyone else describe a ballet dancer in such a rhythmic way! ! This is pure skill.
I can visualize all her stunning movements on the dancing floor! Neethu you have beautifully captured her in graceful motion! Perfect rhyme! Beautiful diction! ! A 10 for this!
Impressive, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. Have a nice day!
I Loved this one.... It was written so nicely, i could completely picture it all
Hey Neethu, Great lines. Appreciated. Thanks for this kind of Poems
Hey Neethu, Great Lines...Appreciated your effort. Thanks for this kind of poems..
A beautiful poem about the ballet dancer. You described the moves so very eloquently and smoothly. Nice rhythm and rhymes. Much adored.