Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Ballet Dancer Comments

Rating: 4.9

She starts gently tapping on the floor and then romps,
With one hand spread and other near to chest, she stomps;

Stage light follows her as she glissades below,
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Neethu Prasanna
COMMENTS
Patricia Grantham 13 October 2013

A beautiful poem about the ballet dancer. You described the moves so very eloquently and smoothly. Nice rhythm and rhymes. Much adored.

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Poet's Fan 19 September 2013

you have picturised the ballet dancer so beautifully and immortalised the dancer in your poetic composition, , it is difficult to separate the dancer from dance and poetry from poet/ here poetess :)

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Jack Crawford 18 September 2013

Feels like I’m there! This as well as other poems by Neethu, paints a vivid picture of the experience. While never having attended a live ballet performance, I feel like I’ve been to one now. Can’t wait for your next poem, keep the great poems coming.

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Jack Crawford 18 September 2013

Feels like I’m there! This as well as other poems by Neethu, paints a vivid picture of the experience. While never having attended a live ballet performance, I feel like I’ve been to one now. Can’t wait for your next poem, keep the great poems coming.

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Ravi Kumar 18 September 2013

Can anyone else describe a ballet dancer in such a rhythmic way! ! This is pure skill.

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Shalini Menon 18 September 2013

This is awesome. Its a beauty...

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Valsa George 18 September 2013

I can visualize all her stunning movements on the dancing floor! Neethu you have beautifully captured her in graceful motion! Perfect rhyme! Beautiful diction! ! A 10 for this!

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Sunil Ramu 18 September 2013

Impressive, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. Have a nice day!

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Anish John 18 September 2013

Nice one.. Great writing skills and also imagination...

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Bharathy R 18 September 2013

Neethu...Quite touching lines...

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Lakshmi J Nair 18 September 2013

I Loved this one.... It was written so nicely, i could completely picture it all

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Bharathy R 18 September 2013

Neethu...Quite touching one..Thanks

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Geethu P 18 September 2013

Hey Neethu, Great lines. Appreciated. Thanks for this kind of Poems

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Geethu P 18 September 2013

Hey Neethu, Great Lines...Appreciated your effort. Thanks for this kind of poems..

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