Ballerina Ethene Comments

well written and well concluded

Terrific write :) and a lovely poem.

It is an amazing poem, felling the freedom within is the moat profound experience and I know when our thoughts come into play we question such freedom and yet we are so free within. Beautifully written Shouvik! ! ! ! Love it very much. Thank you! :)

that's the spirit we all should have, like Ethene's. Brilliant piece

I like it. A girl dancing in glee, even though she's a mother's disgrace and sad but she is still going. A beautiful poem! ! !