Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Ballerina Comments

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As she whirls and twirls it's not her flesh
It's her soul that bathes in ecstasy
It's her heart that feels the bliss
And her eyes that shine like stars
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Yasmin Khan
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

sweet words, beautiful imagery i agree, Ballerina write a poem with her limbs enjoyed to read it

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Heather Wilkins 21 July 2013

a beautiful sight to watch the ballerina dance.

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Passionate Reader 03 July 2013

The body and the soul, spin and spin And ballerina write a poem with her limbs. Lovely lines! ! ! i enjoyed reading it :)

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Hans Vr 02 February 2013

Wow Jasmeen, this is wonderful. These dancing ballerina can realy get into such an all absorbing flow and you brought it into words in a fantastic poem. A joy to read the poem, a joy to see the ballerina in our mental eyes and to feel the dance.

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Anela Mrubata 27 January 2013

Well written.. ''And ballerina write a poem with her limbs.''... The poem is flawless in creating an image as to what you're saying, throughout the whole poem. Well done! I invite you to read my poems as well

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Hazel Durham 22 January 2013

A stunning performance of grace, elegance intricately woven with nature's pure beauty! ! Excellent write!

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Saadat Tahir 21 January 2013

what a fab word pic..... loved it its so vividly descriptive almost surreal it brought to mind a n old Favorite number..... “Feeder - Save Us.”

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